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sushiking 21 May 2011 |
oh god. i shouldn't read this when I'm this emotional. now i'm crying senselessly. god. ;_; |
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BelleOfSummer 21 May 2011 |
awwww! :( I still wish in my very heart that Draco and Hermione are going to be together, but this is the beauty of it all. They CAN'T be together! *wails* I love this story & this ship will always be special to me no matter what. Good job ¢¾ Cheers! |
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N. E. Won 20 May 2011 |
This was so amazing! It made me want to cry so much, and no fanfiction story has ever made me want to cry! You've written the story that I've always wanted to read. I love love love Ron and Hermione together, but I've grown to be fond of the Draco/Hermione romance stories. But if I had to choose, I'd choose Ron, and I'm so glad you didn't make Hermione do something stupid like divorce Ron for Draco.
Anyway, your story was incredibly well-written. I'm the queen of finding grammar mistakes, and I didn't find one. Your descriptions were perfect. There's an attention to detail without overdoing it. The hardest part of writing fiction is writing a good ending, but you did it! That last line, "No matter, she will always be the only woman that had captured his heart," was superb. It evoked such a sad, yet understanding emotion in me. This is one of the best fan-made Harry Potter stories I have EVER read. Please, for the sake of all that is good in this world, never stop writing! | |