Reviews for
Dying On Your Shoulders

040. yay
30 May 2011
For a first, this was pretty good.
039. Stephanie
25 Nov 2007
WHAA. THAT WAS SO SAD. I WANT A CRY SHE DIED ON HIS SHOULDER AND THE SHOOTING STAR WAS HER. *sniffle*
038. Paige
30 Jan 2007
i think thats one of the saddest stories ive ever erad, and dont worry, it was beautifully written
037. zhuara rivera
04 Jan 2007
the story was nice and your grammar is not very bad. I do think that the story was kind of sad too.
036. k
22 Sep 2006
sad, & touching
035. Tessa
20 Jul 2006
THAT WAS SO SAD HOW COULD YOU RIGHT SOMETHING LIKE THAT?!!!!!! Nobody wants Hermione to die GOOD GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
034. dancerrdw
06 Jun 2006
aw that was sad but also cute
033. CurrentlyCrazy
02 Jun 2006
Is when you wrote "THE END" when she died or after? Just curious.
032. HP Storyteller
28 Mar 2006

I loved this story, I wish that somehow Hermione wouldn't have died but I guess thats what makes the story so good, bittersweet love.
I can't imagine how Ron would have felt noticing Hermione had died,

"Oh my god, I killed Hermione! She died of shock." heh.

Great story though

031. illusion100
10 Oct 2005
why? couldn't she find a spell that can reverse the one the was hit with? what happened to th normal they get married and live happily ever after? besides that, it was good.
030. ali
06 Oct 2005
Oh my gosh that is so sad!! Im like crying!!(sniffs)Thats your first fanfic! OMG! thats amazing i love it and you can count on me to read all your fanfics! keep writing!(and is that the end of that story or is there another chapter?)
029. '.'.'.Jesslca'.'.'.
08 Aug 2005
Sniff...tear! So emotional! Yet, so sweet. Luv it ^_^
028. Ayaa
13 Jun 2005
Wow..that's really sad. I like it...short and sweet. An don't worry, the grammar was not horrible, but as you already had made it clear that you know, could use a little work. That didn't matter though. You hooked me from start to finish...great job.
027. athena15
23 Feb 2005
hey it's me! I like this story, it's good!
026. bitterosemary
30 Jan 2005
Wonderful. The ending is magnificent.
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