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yay 30 May 2011 |
For a first, this was pretty good. |
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Stephanie 25 Nov 2007 |
WHAA. THAT WAS SO SAD. I WANT A CRY SHE DIED ON HIS SHOULDER AND THE SHOOTING STAR WAS HER. *sniffle* |
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Paige 30 Jan 2007 |
i think thats one of the saddest stories ive ever erad, and dont worry, it was beautifully written |
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zhuara rivera 04 Jan 2007 |
the story was nice and your grammar is not very bad. I do think that the story was kind of sad too. |
| 036. |
k 22 Sep 2006 |
sad, & touching |
| 035. |
Tessa 20 Jul 2006 |
THAT WAS SO SAD HOW COULD YOU RIGHT SOMETHING LIKE THAT?!!!!!! Nobody wants Hermione to die GOOD GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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dancerrdw 06 Jun 2006 |
aw that was sad but also cute |
| 033. |
CurrentlyCrazy 02 Jun 2006 |
Is when you wrote "THE END" when she died or after? Just curious. |
| 032. |
HP Storyteller 28 Mar 2006 |
I loved this story, I wish that somehow Hermione wouldn't have died but I guess thats what makes the story so good, bittersweet love. I can't imagine how Ron would have felt noticing Hermione had died,
"Oh my god, I killed Hermione! She died of shock." heh.
Great story though |
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illusion100 10 Oct 2005 |
why? couldn't she find a spell that can reverse the one the was hit with? what happened to th normal they get married and live happily ever after? besides that, it was good. |
| 030. |
ali 06 Oct 2005 |
Oh my gosh that is so sad!! Im like crying!!(sniffs)Thats your first fanfic! OMG! thats amazing i love it and you can count on me to read all your fanfics! keep writing!(and is that the end of that story or is there another chapter?) |
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Ayaa 13 Jun 2005 |
Wow..that's really sad. I like it...short and sweet. An don't worry, the grammar was not horrible, but as you already had made it clear that you know, could use a little work. That didn't matter though. You hooked me from start to finish...great job. |
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athena15 23 Feb 2005 |
hey it's me! I like this story, it's good! |
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bitterosemary 30 Jan 2005 |
Wonderful. The ending is magnificent. |
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